Exercises in Writing Style

Exercises in Writing Style

Exercises in Writing Style Prepared by Ms. Teref based on Voice Lessons Lesson 1: Diction Art is the antidote that can call us back from the edge of numbness, restoring the ability to feel for another. By Barbara Kingsolver, High Tide in Tuscon Discuss: 1. By using the word antidote, what does the author imply about the inability to feel for another? 2. If we changed the word antidote to gift, what

effect would it have on the meaning of the sentence? Lesson 2: Diction As I watched, the sun broke weakly through, brightened the rich red of the fawns, and kindled their white spots. By E. B. White, Twins, Poems and Sketches of E.B. White Discuss: 1.What kind of flame does KINDLED imply? How does this verb suit the purpose of the sentence? 2.Would the sentence be strengthened or weakened by changing the sun broke weakly through to the

sun burst through? Explain the effect this change would have on the use of the verb KINDLED. Lesson 3: Diction An aged man is but a paltry thing A tattered coat upon a stick By W.B. Yeats, Sailing to Byzantium Discuss: 1.What picture is created by the use of the word TATTERED? 2.By understanding the connotations of the word TATTERED, what do we understand about the personas attitude toward an aged man?

Lesson 4: Detail Whenever he was so fortunate as to have near him a hare that had been kept too long, or a meat pie made with rancid butter, he gorged himself with such violence that his veins swelled, and the moisture broke out on his forehead. By Thomas Babington Macaulay, Samuel Johnson Discuss: 1. What effect does the detail (the spoiled hare, the rancid butter, the swollen veins, the sweaty forehead) have on the reader? 2. How would the meaning of the sentence be changed by ending it after himself?

Lesson 5: Detail An old man, Don Tomasito, the baker, played the tuba. When he blew into the huge mouthpiece, his face would turn purple and his thousand wrinkles would disappear as his skin filled out. By Alberto Alvaro Rios, The Iguana Killer Discuss: 1. The first sentence is a general statement. How does the second sentence enrich and intensify the first? 2. Contrast the second sentence with the following: When he blew the tuba, his face turned purple and his cheeks puffed out. Which sentence more effective expresses an attitude toward Tomasito? What is that attitude and how is it

communicated? Lesson 6: Syntax No sooner had the reverberation of my blows sunk into silence, then I was answered by a voice from within the tomb! by a cry, at first muffled and broken, like the sobbing of a child, and then quickly swelling into one long, loud, and continuous scream, utterly anomalous and inhuman a howl! a wailing shriek, half of horror and half of triumph, such as might have arisen only out of hell, conjointly from the throats of the damned in their agony and of the demons that exult in the damnation. By Edgar Allan Poe, The Black Cat 1. The dashes in this long sentence set off a series of appositives (a noun or noun phrase placed beside another noun or noun phrase

used to explain it) What noun phrase is explained by the appositives? 2. This sentence makes syntactic and semantic sense if it ends with the first exclamation point. What do the appositives add to the meaning and effectiveness of the sentence? Lesson 7: Syntax The seven years difference in our ages lay between us like a chasm: I wondered if these years would ever operate between us as a bridge. By James Baldwin, Sonnys Blues 1.What function does the colon serve in this sentence? 2.How would the meaning and impact of the sentence change if the sentence read as follows:

The seven years difference in our ages lay between us like a chasm, and I wondered if these years would ever operate between us as a bridge. Lesson 8: Syntax He had been prepared to lie, to bluster, to remain sullenly unresponsive; but, reassured by the goodhumored intelligence of the Controllers face, he decided to tell the truth, straightforwardly. By Aldous Huxley, Brave New World 1.What effect does the repetition of infinitives (to lie, to bluster, to remain) in the first clause have on the meaning of the sentence? How do these infinitives prepare you for the infinitive phrase (to tell the truth) in the second clause.

2.What is the function of the semicolon in Huxleys sentence? Lesson 9: Syntax When I am too sad and too skinny to keep keeping, when I am a tiny thing against so many bricks, then it is I look at trees. By Sandra Cisneros, The House on Mango Street 1. What kind of grammatical structure is repeated in this sentence? What is the effect of the repetition? 2. This is a periodic sentence, a sentence which delays the subject and verb to the end. What idea

is emphasized by the end-focus in this sentence? Lesson 10: Syntax He slowly ventured into the pond. The bottom was deep, soft clay, he sank in, and the water clasped dead cold round his legs. By D. H. Lawrence, The Horse-Dealers Daughter 1.What effect does sentence length have on this passage? 2.Examine the second sentence. How does the structure of the sentence reinforce the meaning?

Lesson 11:Syntax cumulative sentence Oh, theyll love me all right. It will take time, but theyll love me.[] After all the the old women have lain with the teenagers; when all the young girls have slept with their old drunken uncles; after all the black men fuck all the white ones; when all the white women kiss all the black ones; when the guards have raped all the jailbirds and after all the whores make love to their grannies; after all the faggots get their mothers trim; when Lindbergh sleeps with Bessie Smith and Norma Shearer makes it with Stepin Fetchit; after all the dogs have

fucked all the cats and every weathervane on every barn flies off the roof to mount the hogs then therell be a little love left over form me. And I know just what it will feel like. Sula by Toni Morrison

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